- Look more at research into similar products. I need to use my research in order to establish my ideas and show where they came from
- Don't use singles as main or supporting cover lines as they are not major events: use new albums or tours instead
- Add more musical mise-en-scene to my artist
- add more substance to the contents pave
- have a holistic approach to the cover page, contents page and double page spread.
- Make double page spread font size 8
Personal Feedback:
- Cover page picture is too small, it needs to be cropped so that it fills more space.
- too much space between the head of the artist and the masthead
- more content on the contents page to fill negative space
- add more content to the article
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