Feedback on coursework (from teacher)

This is the feedback i received from my teacher about the final draft of my magazine:

1. All elements - front cover, contents page and double page spread - have been submitted
2. there is a minimum of four photographs
3. essential conventions have been applied: dateline, price, URL, bar code
4. The immediate genre of the magazine is determinable - Rock genre
5. Front page cover lines (main/supporting) are consistent with the contents page
6. There are enough features to the contents page 
7. The double page spread page numbers correlate with the contents page
8. the font size is 8/9
9. Some capital letters are missing

Front cover: Generally fine

Contents page: No improvements suggest

Double page spread: Interview lacks content